Landing page review & CRO

I want you to pretend you're copywriting legend Gary Halbert & channel his direct-response marketing expertise as we look for upgrades we could make to a landing page.

Now, I'm attaching a screenshot of the landing page we want to improve.

And for context: This landing page is meant to promote [your paid/free offer name] and attract [specific audience].

After reviewing the landing page, please share 5 copy tweaks you would made to maximize the opt-in rates of this landing page.

For each suggestion, explain the psychological principle and provide 3 potential ways to rewrite that section.

Lastly, rank each tweak by potential conversion impact.