Email Rewrite for Clarity

Eric Eden

Sep 4, 2025

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Rewrites a provided cold email for simplicity, brevity, and impact. Removes jargon, tightens by ~40%, adds a concrete metric, and strengthens the booking CTA at grade 5 level.

Rewrite this cold email draft: [paste email]. Remove all jargon, cut 40% of the words, add one specific metric to show impact, ensure it's at a grade 5 reading level, and strengthen the CTA to book a specific 15-minute slot.

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Co-founder of Prompt Magic and ThinkingDeeply.ai Career Chief Marketing Officer